This is my second draft for my advert, I have changed it from having the same picture as the album cover to a picture of the band, the shot I have used is found from the Internet and is in the same style I will be having mine, it does not look highly edited or staged, its plain and simple and just shows the band as they are. This is something I am going to try to create when I do my advert image. I have also changed the advert from advertising the band by using reviews to the advert promoting a tour.